Preface Part 2

I’ve decided to spend a bit more time on the editing and polishing of my new book, so I won’t be releasing it until the end of July or the beginning of September.

But I realised that I hadn’t posted the second half of Chapter One, so here it is! Sorry it took so long!

Part Two

“Pick it up boys. We have a few hours of dark left, we cannot be out her once dawn breaks, we are it easy range. I want nice smooth rowing, no splashing the water. I want total silence.” No one answers. Karl pulls himself gently and slowly up to the bench watching the coastline with me.

“To your right.” Karl says. I follow along the coast back and forward. I can’t see anything. No movement, nothing.

“I can’t see it.”

“Straight ahead.”

“Slow down.” I say to Luca, realising what Karl is talking about, it’s in the water. All four oars drop down at the same time and we glide to a stop I hand the binoculars over to Luca.

“Look in the water.” I say.

He mutters something to himself. “Right, you are going to bring us in and around them.”

“There are too many, and there’ll be plenty more below.” I say, my hand twitches, wanting rub at my neck. I don’t want to be responsible if we sink.

“This is where we land. We have to get through it, guide us through. Quietly.” He winks at me.

I take the binoculars back and lift them quickly to my eyes. “Straight ahead there is a four foot rock. To your right there is a three foot rock.”

“To your left there is an eight foot rock, but you have a six foot wide clearance, the others are only four and we won’t fit.” Karl says.

“You heard them boys, round to your left. Keep it slow and steady.” He says quieter than the wind.

“Mark, turn there.” Luca says looking down into the water. “You’ve got inches, try not to touch the rock, we need all oars in one piece.” Luca nods at whatever Mark’s doing. “That’s it boys bring it through nice and slow. William where to?”

“Stay straight. There’s a few more big ones. Stop, stop.” I say urgently and too loud. My voice lifts over the wind, “stop.” I say quieter. “Underneath us.” The boat lurches as everyone’s heads drop to the side of the boat. I thought it was the wind moving the tops of the water, but its two dozen tiny razor sharp rock tips right beside us. There will be some touching the bottom of the boat right now.

Luca squints into the darkness. “Good work William, where do we go?”

I don’t know, we’re a quarter of a mile off the coast, and I can’t see anything but the sharp, pointed tips of wet, black ragged rocks rising out of the water.

“William?”

“Move back a little, then to the side.” I nod my head, confirming the plan to myself. “Move to the right, then hold your oar down and see what’s under there, move it around a bit under the boat, make sure we’re not riding on anything.”

The boat inches back toward the massive rock behind us, then gently to the right before Luca drops his oar and feels around in the water. “It’s clear.”

“Then run this way a bit. We going to need to check every little bit. I can’t see what’s under the water.”

High on the cliff light suddenly appears out of the night, illuminating a group of tanks sitting on the edge on the land, guns pointed out over the water, then it shuts of just as quickly. Faint gunfire is carried our way over the wind.

Luca holds up his hand just as Mark goes to dig at the water with his oar, held up high above the water to race to land. “It’s not at us. They’re not firing at us. We know what’s up there, let’s just carefully get to shore. We’ve got an hour, William, Karl, let’s get it done.”

“Sir.” We both whisper.

“We’ve got clear water twenty yards to the left, could be rocks under water.” Karl says, scanning wider than me.

“Left boys.” Luca calls softly.

I lean forward watching the surface. “I can’t see anything breaking the surface.” Luca keeps pulling, relying on me to watch behind him. Sweat trickles down my spine, my eyes keep flicking to the cliffs.

“Take it around a bit to the right, a group of little ones in the water.”

“Right.” Luca says without looking down.

“Hold up.” Karl says, holding his hand up. “The tops are smoothing out. I think we can lift the boat and walk across the rocks to shore from here.”

“Are you sure?” Luca asks, I check too.

“I think it’s better than try to row around them. We’ll have to go down a couple of hundred yards to get to shore if you don’t want to go over them.”

“What’s the best one to start from?” Luca asks, Karl and I lift our binoculars trying to make a quick choice.

“That one.” I say pointing.

“I think so too.” Karl drops his binoculars down.

“Are we close to where we are supposed to land?” Paul asks.

“It’s here somewhere.”

“Let’s get out boys.” Luca uses his oar on the rock to pull us closer, while John pushes the water away from the boat, sending us lightly into the rock. Luca climbs out and the boat shudders. He lies flat on his stomach and holds the boat, and one by one, we each climb out and onto the rock. Karl and I climb to a rock just ahead of the other.

Luca pushes the boat toward us, “up.” He says and the boat is out of the water, and we pick our way across the rocks.

“We’re going to have to get back in.” Luca says. There’s thirty, maybe forty yards of freezing water between us, standing on the last rock we can reach and the beach.

“I don’t think we can.” I say, “we’ll tip it.”

“Maybe.” He says, “But I’m not volunteering to swim, are you?”

“Not tonight Sir.”

“Good, then, you can be first one in. To stabilise the boat.” He smiles.

“Yes Sir.” I whisper. Moving all the way to the front, grabbing an oar, Karl takes the back corner and we load up the rest of the boat corner by corner.

“Right, let’s get moving.” I tug on the oar for the first time, it only takes a minute to pull us to the pebble lined shore.

“Put it up.” Luca calls. We stand three in a line and hoist the boat onto our shoulders, grunting softly as we walk it up the beach.

Luca stops, doesn’t move the boat, but pulls out a pistol and points it into the darkness. “Stop. I will shoot.” He says calmly. I freeze looking in the direction that he is. I can’t see anything. My hands shake under the boat, at least no one can see it.

I don’t understand the answer, but Luca puts the gun away and a short, stocky man steps toward us.

“Drop it in here.” He says and we follow him up the beach, until it changes to sandy dirt and then long grass.

We flick the boat off our shoulders, grasping the inside of it in one movement before sliding it in the deep hole. The man walks away and comes back with a shovel for each of us and we replace dirt and sand in the hole covering everything back the way it was before.

He walks over it, stamping down a couple of soft spots, smiles at Luca. “This way.” He motions with his head.

I keep hold of my shovel and follow last up into chest high grass. We move quickly through it, ending up in a small clearing of pine trees. An old pick-up truck is waiting for us.

“One in front, under the seat. Five under the deck.” The man says looking at us. “Your gear can go in the barrels, they are empty.” He turns to Luca. “I thought there was only four of you coming.”

“There was, but we needed two more.” Mark and I were last minute add-ins, we are by far the youngest and newest to the army. I was completely surprised when they asked us. Mark just thought it was because he’s Mark. I watch the man show Luca where we all need to go.

“Come on Will, ladies first.” Mark nudges me when the man pries up the last of the floor boards for us to lie under.

Karl swings himself up and over the side in one go. I pull myself over at the same time as Mark, John and Paul, leaving Luca to take the front spot.

The old man stuffs one pack into each of the barrels. “No, I need mine.” I sit up suddenly.

“It won’t fit.” The old man tells me.

“I need my pack.” I repeat and look at Luca.

“He needs his pack.”

“And where will you put it?”

“Here,” Luca says, “Move your feet Will, push them up against Mark’s.” I squish them over as far as I can and Luca shoves the pack firmly in place. “Try not to kick it.” Luca smiles and the old man lays the first floor board over John, Luca starts in from the other side, grinning at me when he places the final board over the top of me.

“Sleep tight.” He says tapping the wood, then barrels scrap over top and get secured against the sides.

 

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Falling free tomorrow

Falling is free tomorrow on Amazon so swing by and grab yourself a copy!

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The Charm

I was roaming through Amazon over the weekend, as you do, and I remembered that I still hadn’t read Alana Siegel’s The Charm. I snapped it up, and I’ve just finished it.

It was great! I really loved her writing and the story was lovely. It really kept you guessing until right at the end, which I love.

If you’re looking for a ya romance, with a whole lota super powers then head yourself right on over to Amazon and pick yourself up a copy, it’s only .99cents!

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been gone

Finally all moved in at my new house and back to writing. With moving my schedule has gone out the window and hopefully I’ll be publishing One Minute in about 6 weeks from now.

But, for everyone being so patient I thought I’d post the first half of chapter one.

Here goes!

Preface

“William, please! Is it not enough that your father is gone?” Mum pleads with me. She gave up on yelling half an hour ago, the only thing she has left to do now is cry.

“How do I wait at home everyday to see if either one of you makes it home?” I don’t want to look at her face. She takes advantage of my silence, “How do I do that William. How do I wonder if my son and husband will come home to me? You tell me what I am supposed to do if neither of you come home?”

“It’ll be fine Mum, they would have called me up if I didn’t volunteer anyway.”

“Not today, you’ve only just turned eighteen, why can’t you wait. Wait for them to ask you. They might not because your father is gone. We need some men at home. Please William.”

“Mum.” I hold her by the shoulders, looking down into her eyes. I am trying to speak gently. I have to make her understand that I am not here asking permission. “I’m sorry that I am disappointing you, but I have to help. I can’t wait here doing nothing everyday.”

Mum stiffens her shoulders like I insulted her, “You aren’t doing nothing, you are with me and your grandparents. You’re making money where you can.”

“I haven’t earned a cent in weeks and probably won’t. Please mum, let me go.”

“No William, please that is enough.” Mum turns away from me. She picks up the frying pan to make us supper, she turns the pan around and around in her hands.

Mum half turns back to me, it looks like she is going to say something, but she closes her mouth and turns back to the range and starts frying some potatoes. I take that as my queue that the conversation is over, walking out of the kitchen, softly shutting the door behind me.

I lean on the back of the door in my room for a second, before pulling out my one backpack, stuffing it full. Ticking off the items on the list the recruitment officer gave me.

Mark’s dad is taking us tonight.

***

Sorry Mum,

I know you don’t want me to go, but I’ll be fine. Sorry about leaving you with just Nan and Pop, but I have to do something to help. I can’t get any work, we all know that there is nothing for me to do, but wait for them to call me up.

Don’t worry about me; we will be back before you know it and you can yell at me all you want then!

Love, Will

Two Months Later

“William, come in close.” I huddle in around all the others. “There’s only six of us going. We need to drop in supplies to company Dee. We’re going to have to go across on a row boat. It’s dangerous, but there’s no other way to get across the channel without being gunned down, and we still might. We have five minutes, get your packs.”

“Yes Sir.” We call in unison, spin on our heel and march away.

I can’t see where I’m going, I just know where I left my pack. Mark is close behind me, he’s excited to be chosen, but after everything Luca told me about what’s happening over there, I’m not sure I want to go.

I hoist my pack over my shoulders, and pull the straps down hard until they’re biting into my shoulders, but if I have to run it won’t fall off.

The command comes. “Company.” Softly, but firmly through the still, damp, night air. Unseen, I walk swiftly to the edge of the sand, the edge of home, and position myself at the far end of a wooden row boat. Two oars on each side and the whole English Channel in front of us.

Luca’s pack, along with mine and John’s, get wedged under the wooden seat. We load up the middle section with medical supplies. Small wooden boxes stack three high between the two benches at each end that the six of us have to sit on. Three at each end.

“You have your map Luca?” Our commander asks.

“Yes Sir.”

“Good. It will be burned if anything happens, understood?”

“Yes Sir.” He replies seriously.

“William, you have the extra soft pack in your supplies.”

“Yes Sir.” I nod my head as well. I’ve checked three times just to be sure, Mark laughed over my shoulder, saying that I was turning into his mother.

“They must have that. If nothing else make sure they get that.” He says to me.

“Sir.” I bark out as four others push us softly into the inky black night. Luca and John pull on their oars at the same time, then a few seconds later Mark, Paul pull on theirs. Karl is in the middle, like me, spotting, but from behind us.

We glide out further and further into the black, Karl nods at me and we both swivel around pulling up our binoculars and scan the horizon for any light. There’s not a lot to see, but the tiniest spark of light means someone else is out here too and we are too small to put up a fight to anyone. We need lots of warning to turn back.

Luca sheds his coat after half an hour, but doesn’t lose his rhythm.

After an hour Karl sits up, making the boat rock slightly to one side, my signal that he wants me to check something. He points without a word and I follow his finger with my binoculars looking for whatever he saw.

“A house?” I ask.

“Maybe.” He whispers. “But on what side?”

“Can’t tell.” The shorelines between Dover and Calais aren’t that far apart and we can’t see either coastline tonight.

We have been waiting for a night like this for the last four nights. It’s not raining, but it looks like it could any moment. The clouds are covering the moon, but not low enough to block our sight of the coasts, but it means that people can see us too.

The wood on the boat is wet and black like the water. We are all dressed in dark green wool. No army uniform, no identification other than our accents. No one knows we are going except our commander and the commander of Company Dee.

For the last two months I’ve been learning basic French, learning mostly to wipe the English accent off my words. Out of everyone, I can’t get caught. I need to get whatever is in the soft pack to Company Dee. There’s one extra map in the soft pack. If I get separated for any reason, I can get myself to where we are going.

“I think my arm just fell off.” John whispers after a couple of hours of constant rowing.

“It’s fine.” Luca says. “It will just join mine. I lost it an hour or two ago.”

“I can’t feel my feet anymore.” I admit. I’ve been kneeling for so long that the blood has stopped running down there, but I can’t move unless I see something. Even then I have to be careful, there’s too much weight on the boat, too much shifting will send us all into the water and I can’t swim all that well. Mark can barely keep his head above the water, he’d probably have five minutes before he went under. So I stay on my aching knees and hope that I have toes when I’m finally able to stand up again.

“What are you complaining about.” Mark says, “I don’t see you pulling on an oar.”

“You want to swap and have you knees soaking wet, your feet numb and your back feeling like someone’s packed a bunch of ice down the back of your shirt?” Karl hisses, straightening his back, he’s so tall that he’s eye to eye with Mark.

“Always complaining.” Mark says, but doesn’t lose time with Paul, everyone keeps the boat going at a steady rate.

“Slightly to the right.” I whisper up to Luca watching my compass for the first time. I was starting to worry that the moon wasn’t going to shine through the clouds at all tonight.

“Ease it round boys.” Luca gives the quiet command. Mark puts his oar in the water and holds it for a second while the other two row and the boat moves slightly to the side, then Mark and Luca start pulling again.

I push my compass back into my pocket and scan the horizon again. I stop, go back and look again. “I think we have company.” I breathe to Luca.

“Where?”

“Behind your left shoulder.”

“How many?”

“Can’t tell.”

“They got a tank out?”

“Don’t know for sure. But there’s something moving on the cliff.” The boat rocks, Karl must be turning my way.

He swears under his breath. “There’s someone up there.”

“How many?” Luca asks again.

“It’s too hard to tell. It’s a long way up.” I say.

“Then how can you tell that someone is moving up there?”

“We can’t be sure that there’s anything. But it looks like a big something moving. They must be using a covered light down on the ground so they are back-lit.” Karl says.

“How big?” Luca asks, his eyes narrowing, he’s probably running through all the maps of the coast, trying to remember the best one if we can’t make our original landing point.

“Tank size.” We both say. Luca nods.

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Writer’s crush

I have fallen hard for Christina Perri’s ’A thousand years’ and “Jar of hearts’ in fact I have to have them both lined up to listen to one after the other because I just don’t know which one I like better. Either way, serious writer’s crush happening!

If you haven’t heard either of them, here they are. Thanks YouTube!

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